Leona closed the door violently.
Because adverbs’ main function is to qualify, support, or buttress the meaning of verbs, it is easier and more convenient to use them (adverbs) rather than to spend time finding the appropriate verb. We can then say that the use and abuse of adverbs may be attributed to gaining expediency at the cost of quality. Notice how a more adequate verb would eliminate the need for the use of the adverb ‘violently’:
Leona slammed the door.
Editors have an eagle eye when it comes to spotting the ‘ly’ nuisances. So don’t risk the embarrassment of having your work returned marked unacceptable because of the use of adverbs. The offenses are even more glaring when the adverbs are doubled up: Leona breathed noisily and wearily. Could be revised to: Leona yawned. Mark Twain wrote in a magazine about what he called ‘this adverb plague”:
I am dead to adverbs; they cannot excite me … There are subtleties which I cannot master at all,--they confuse me, they mean absolutely nothing to me,--and this adverb plague is one of them.
It is not that adverbs do not mean anything, nor that they do not spice up one’s writing, or that they are hard to master—it is that they add very little and subtract a lot.
Often a writer must use them. But master writers limit their use to an absolute minimum. And when they do have to use an adverb they prefer to qualify or buttress their verbs with adverb substitutes—such as prepositional phrases. Take this example:
Jacqueline Susan wrote brilliantly.
The adverb ‘brilliantly’ (which qualifies the conjugated verb ‘wrote’) may be replaced by the prepositional phrase ‘with brilliance’:
Jacqueline Susan wrote with brilliance.
But what we may consider blasphemous in the temple of writing is the use of adverbs as sentence openers:
Ardently, lucidly, vigorously, humorously and passionately Josh Brogan sang the song-homage to Van Gogh ‘Vincent.’
All that useless concatenation of adverbs could have been avoided by a simple verb:
When it comes to ‘Vincent” no one can out-sing John Brogan.
As horror master writer Stephen King says, "The road to hell is paved with adverbs." So, if you consider yourself a serious writer, after you have done your writing for the day, run a program that will automatically remove all adverbs ending in ‘ly.’
You might still end up with many other adverbs, but not the most glaring ones—the ‘ly’ nuisances. To practice what I am preaching let me see what I can find. Ooops! “ … will automatically remove …” Let’s replace ‘remove’ with ‘expunge.’ The result is then that now we don’t need to use ‘automatically’ at all.
- Oxymoron in Action
- IanFleming's Intransitive Verbs
- How to Use Similes
- What is an Allegory?
- StephenKing vs StephenieMeyer
- Updike: Use of Infinitives
- Possessive Nouns
- Using Zeugma for Humor
- HowToBegin Your Novel
- Truman Capote's Techniques
- How To Create Great Villains
- War on Adverbs
- Using Rhetorical Tools
- Ed McBain Sold 90 million books
- Hook Your Reader
- Dante and Writing
- Derrida and Writing
- Literature Transforms Us
Senada Selmani, model Sentence Openers
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